Monday, November 5, 2012

Its a book

Its a Book
This book aptly captures the effect technology is having on our social structure.  Books were once as revolutionary as computers.  Who uses scrolls anymore?  Scrolls were more portable than stone tablets, and stone tablets were more portable than mud, sand and stone walls.  They are all ways of conveying ideas, expressing them to other people.

The story exemplifies changes happening in the minds of children, people who will sometime be expected to carry on our cultural heritage.  Why be surprised if they don't read if we abandon that technology?  Why be surprised if our children play games, if that is what we do or what we hand them to do or even if we keep those things away from them?

Notes19 Sep 2012

19 Sep 2012
Notes
n a perfect world he could walk in and we would be discussing Jared Diamond and the Daedalus Project. He wants us to discuss Jared Diamond and the Daedalus Project. If we were talking about this meaningfully, the teacher might not give a quiz on something we clearly understand.

That's why he was glad to hear us talking about the Daedalus project as he walked in. That's a hint. Might have a quiz. Don't take out a sheet of paper, except for taking notes.

Quiz question 1--Moment of truth

How many of you like to read?

How many find it loathsome?

You'll find, even in a family with many siblings, some kids like to read and some kids don't.

Many people find something they like as a teen and are still reading the same thing when they are old.

Sometimes our minds are just wired for other sorts of things. There was a good neighbor who could not could not master reading. He was gentle, kind and also very smart. He could play the violin and he could draw but did not read well.

Reading is a rhetorical triangle, with the author at one side of the triangle and the subject at another, with a communion going back and forth between the vertices of the triangle. When you read a text you are always dreaming. When you are reading you are not only reading the inner text in this novel, but recreating a novel or experience of your own that is uniquely your own. Two people may read the same novel, but will not experience it in the same way, although there is an overlap between cultural experiences. Sometimes we are more kinesthetic through wiring, we connect through more active sorts of things, like framing a house.

All of us experience metaphors of life. We have a massive force multiplier, basically a time machine. We can traverse space and time through text and expand whatever we enjoy far beyond the limitations of our finite experience.Discussion on a children's book - It's a Book, by Lane Smith

Books are still more portable than electronics.
visual cues, sub-sectioning of a book

not normal readers

writers and designers of technical text

how does diamond integrate visual rhetoric

maps he puts in there

creating a picture

text creating images rather than images being image page 78 Discussion on the book Guns germs and steel

Visual rhetoric

The flow chart discussed at this point is not included in the Kindle version of the textbook.Images would probably increase the size of the e-book file.

conceptual diagrams integrate with the text

-----------------------grammar and style issues--quiz next class period ----------------------------

how many ways can you make a sentence in English?

invent our own grammar

sentence structure only one way.

Noun verb subject--I am Vern

I kick soccer balls. kick is the action--I is the pronoun, the one that takes the action

action--verb

------------------computer is shutting down at this point--I closed it and put it away and continued on paper for the remainder of class. ---------------------------------------------------

Visual rhetoric
Flow chart not included in the Kindle edition of Guns, Germs and Steel

Conceptual diagrams integrate with the text to make his argument.

How do you go from a string of text----

How does he integrate graphics and text?

Cross reference far away from original reference

Synaptic text and image together Within sight graphic becomes a schema to hang detail schema works linguistically text makes pictures in the mind

GPS map, list of instructions

Women's minds linguistic, men's are visual

Ultimate factors in

Latitude-different plants in various places microclimate changes-altitude changes climate shown in a very small areaThe 

12,000 continental traverse -land at a rough letter to know resolution to left

Alta met factor many suitable animal species

Can't still mystic eight large animal species has to beat amenable to domestication

Discussion on planters

The more suitable wild species the more likely you will get domestic species

How does he integrates diagrams with text

Captions create a conversation between image and text

Image that's grouped curiously

Discussion on bookbinding

If you look at the spine paper is punched
Imagine scratch paper is a big sheet of paper

Large sheet go to a a bindery and trend

Each sheet is folded into a signature

Folds the paper each time is double set three times folded makes 16

512 fold equals 22 to 10 power

Fold nine times it gets 512

Biggest signature  times six

Hard bound the  books made as signature uncoated stock
Cutter plate

Coated stock gives a much clearer image

fourth side they stitched into the book, chops the four sides

Perfect binding-perfect bound book

Polymer glue Bead-looks somewhat like stitching

Sown books plus a glue are better

Chapters 123

Discussion on grammar and style

Subjects verb and object
Simplest way
Acton equals transitive
S-V-O
I kick soccer balls
Anti-acton equals intransitive
S-V
I coughed
An equality = equation = equality = entrance intransitive linking
S-V -PN predicate noun
I am Vern.
I am eccentric-- subject complement
Pa = predicate adjectives = passive -avoid "Be" verbs Proposal -Gantt Chart

Soccer balls were kicked by me.

Use flip sentence is
Subject verb flip sentence is

SO-flip
Passive transitive

Soccer balls were kicked by me

Government documents written in passive voice

Technical documents-what gets the job done

But the subject first

Passive means to emphasize that the object and deemphasize the subject

I broke this resistor

This resistor was broken by us

Which sentences can be passive? 

flipping-have to have objects and subjects

Only transitive scanned the passive new paragraph proposals-we all have to do one

Teams only one
Daedalus  -each must do their own

Notes17 Sep 2012

17 Sep 2012
Notes

homework from last week: Chapter 3 in guns germs and steel, + Writing with style
  • wilderness writing class
    coyote gulch east of zion's southeast of the henry mountains
    souuthwest of bryce canyon rim
    driven as far as coyote gulch
    drive on the south side of the lake brutal must have been rough on the wagons
    walking across sand dunes, fossilized paradise with a stream running through it to get there you climb through a crack in the wall walk down a long sand dune into a paradise.
    always start class with a poem
    poems contain what yo won't find in a newspaper but they do contain what men die for lack of every day
    water is the fundamental shaper
    water
    uses specific concrete nouns and vowels
    in the winter the road is imagery discussion about what images were generated by the poem.
    what makes a good technical writer is the imagery built into
     Mountain being a metaphor for the unknown world
    we pour away a little water
    on the main water on the road, asphalt
    softly beaming their faces warming
    in the summer dust
    dust filled our winter ruts with a level of softness.
    specificity is important
     attention to detail in the world around us
    they don't focus on the beauty of the commonplace concrete world
    pouring water on dust causes balling up
    effect of resonant image "lie on the thick dust gleaming"The concrete specific world is important.
    roll call
    Proposal--then grammar and style
    Main project--one of the intermediate exercise projects is the object description
    good craft--description will make your proposals better
    Object/mechanism description assignment
    leatherman like multitool
    naming is the first thing you do
    not being able to name in terms of documentation its a bad thing
    break down into parts
    picture i f;you can't use language
    can't take a picture of an object that doesn't exist so it must be described by imagination and verbal imagery
    describe shape texture size what's it made of
    steel stamped silver in color
    what are we going to stick them to.
    overall object--analytical writing
    argumentation
    thesis
    3 subpoints or main argument
    metaphoric
    parable--parabola
    a reflection between a real world concept and
    give an overview of the object, a comparison
    establish an orientation for your reader quiz on Wednesday
     sits on its base with the ski jump end on the right.
     analytical branching
    establish relationship b3tween the parts
    Object/Mechanism Description Assignment
     in the subsections
     spinner serrated edge
    make it so the person can recreate it
    parts--4
    describe each part below
    first subsection title
    transitions
    establish the orientation--then vary the orientation put the reader at the base in real life its easier to move the object than the reader
    in text its easier to move the reader

    join them together with measurement type words joining line that starts the top of the base how the line is oriented how wide it is how deep it is:
  • style guides are arbitrary
    Form follows function
    Mars expedition--landing is difficult--Moon is easy --barely above nominal--moon has no atmosphere to slow a machine down to land. Earth has a lot of gravity and atmosphere
    Mixed metric and ENglish measurements caused disaster
    Use specific concrete language active rather than passive.Antiques road show
    Proposal introduction:First subsectionthis assignment sheet is the first subsection
    comma discussion, JFK and Stalin
    put a semi colon before a sentence with lots of commas.
     how many main list elements are there? 3
     how many sublist items for
     how many 2
     how many 3
     lists and sublists mainly exist in technical documents. COntent--divide subject into parts
     define what you are going to explain
     format-- the way you setup all of your documents
     will our proposal contain all of these theings? maybe but not always
     must provide the followingresource, assessment etc.
     outline of own projecthome remedy guide-- could fold into the Daedylus project
    make ours part of the daedylus projectSolution paper that fits come up with an outline does it dovetail into the projectDon't use Wikipedia as a source, but you can use their sourcestime line Gantt chart
     time line for project--x axis and y axis projects to be completed
     do timeline with any time management software or excel or word
     accounting for all these things.
     use week increments for the timeline
    next time we'll continue in any questions on writing project

Notes 12 Sep 2012

12 Sep 2012
Notes

Notes 10 Sep 2012

10 Sep 2012
Notes
Discussion on Guns, Germs and Steel

each of these potential reasons for the proximate causes of neurets complex they have guns they have germs and steel, why?
well they were smart
When was the last time there was a famine in this country?

We looked at genetics and have we ever discussed 7 +/- 2?
It turns out that in all of the worst cultures in the world from the Amazon Basin to Sweden that humans can maintain in short term memory 7 +/- 2 bits of information.

How many discrete bits of information does your phone number contatin?

7 +/- 2 bits of discrete information in short term memory.

how many discrete bits of information does your phone number contain?

Somebody said 7, somebody said 10 yeah its occluded us.

There's ten digits how many discrete bits

How many digits are in a phne number?

You said 3-3-4 which is getting onto something.  801  how many discrete bits is that

3, if you're from New York, but if you're from Utah how many discrete bits is 801?

Discrete bits are made up of subbits and if you grew up in Orem 225 is where?  224?  222?

It's Orem.  It used to be, now everything's cell phones.  But it used to be and in fact where I grew up,  you'd dial just the first number, the prefix and the last four numbers.

My home phone number growing up was four 3312.  That's five discrete bits.

We treat the area code as a single bit, and the next one sometimes we treat it as a single bit, if the area code is a bit and the prefix is three bits that's four plus four is eight bits.  That's 7 +/- 2.
But if the first two are both discrete bits you're down to six and that's under 7 +/- 2.  You go to a different culture and you still have 7 +/- 2. Its just the dashes or spaces in between them are different.
If somebody asks you for a phone number in this culture an you don't want to give it to them and you don't want to  lie you give them your phone number but you put the spaces in a different  place.

My phone number is 8014892394. it won't fit into the schema cause your brain has been hardwired to conserve for yourself.It won't stick in the schema so you've got to
The point being made here, and this idea will come up in the assignment in your documents again is that peoples minds tend to be the same. That IQ is one of the hardest things to assess. Human IQ.
because its so any IQ test is so culturally dependent. and Diamond makes a good argument for human beings smartest people.  Not just New Guineans, but which New Guineans?  Hunter/gatherers, the first level of society are the most intelligent because they have to account for so much more in their environment they have to be massive generals whereas we're very siloized, we have one specific silo we're stuck to.

What are the potential reasons for disparities between cultures and one culture dominating for eradicating/annihilating another any breaks it down into possibilities and addresses each possibility what do we call that structure here's an object and why does one bunch have more than others here's a reason here's a reason his potential what are we call it when we break this object into all of these potential smaller objects

Analytical design of a document.

You have the thesis you were taught in junior high school or middle school you have a thesis and that the end of the thesis you have support points and those support points map out to What?  Topic sentences for your paragraphs that's an analytical breaking of large objects into smaller objects and going on from there OK look-up at Diamond us that hand and how he transitions from one element to the next read first two chapters of Diamond for next time

Discussion on list of topics suggested

Have you got any more known famous.  Topic ideas for term project that you wanna work which pay you will work with two other classmates on

Did we vote on all these it'll take to get deeply

Stick with Daedalus and the original problem.

Voting on the projects were working on how many vote chances to get one

Meeting for Mr. Hatch.

Discussion/read through of the proposal assignment

Split into groups/discussion of projects

Notes 5 Sep 2012

5 Sep 2012
Notes

patterns

proximity--self defining trend

continuity--when some pattern draws the eye

similarity of shapes, color, size, alignment, elements governed the way we perceive order and wholeness particularly in print media alignment defines space.

particularly in media how gestalt is used

this margin defines body content this defines headings

proximity



Resume review

look at a couple of resumes'

give two shots at a grade

term project after resumes

Adam's resume
thumb drive on open office

look at one in word
prefers word

how many hard returns in a row?
No more than one allowed.

Hard returns
How to use hard and soft returns in Word 2010.

What kind of leading needed to make

interparagraph spacing
change styles to get it to do it to all of them.

Word options, advanced, go to display and change it
Word-word option-advanced.

Update to match selection

Why is this indented from the paragraphs

front matter

How to get the ruler up?  small button at the top of the scrollbar

interparagraph spacing is one way to define paragraphs.
the other way is initial indents

an initial indent on a paragraph breaks up the flow the gestalt of alignment

Short choppy paragraphs this gets intrusive instead of using an initial indent we usually use interparagraph spacing instead

Dear is a salutation.  if she is not dear to you, don't use dear.

Sincerely is invisible, worn out, use closure with impact such as thank you.

In a highly technical document

Stay in paragraph and that's a body paragraph so he updates body to match selection

Get rid of underline it is redundant and could be tacky

Text itself is creating the alignment if the design is right.

New style

paragraphs are made up of characters that have their own attributes

Style is going to be based on underlying properties.

Children's autism in the classroom,
set goals make sure they are met

anything less than or greater than is a comment

cut all preositional phrase off, and add more detail

Can the child work, can the child learn

Important to prove they can work their way through school.

Missionary, said missionary not a euphemism.

Important to make sure you stand by your beliefs.

References, available on request is a given.

the idea is this information is personal.  If you are serious about me I'll give you my references.

Making iterations

Analytical departmentation

Objectives on resumes--conflictiong suggestions put career summary instead, applying for the job indicates your objective, sounds boiler plate just put a career summary in.


Good structure

go into education turn off underline

underlined in the body text

use paragraph rules, borders around your paragraph.  Give the border tool

half point rule, he likes hairline rules  turn it on for the bottom of the paragraph

The idea is to turn on just one border, the bottom border of the text.  Use the borders button.

Once we've established job continuity, that's all we need.

Try to make the language used more proactive linguistically.  Instead of instructor use instructed.

Put the place it occurred.

Maintained and winterized instead of maintenance and winterization, use verb instead of a noun to give it a little more punch

Verify that you did this emphasize responsibility without supervision.  Said it here in a place you can prove it.

Keep references handy where you can reach them.

Throw underhand to keep from spinning.  Overhand causes it to spin.

Review, track changes on.  Peers will review your work and you will review theirs

Nonproportional typeface.  Consolas is an older proportional face. Most are proportional these days. Has old feel.Styles, have to create a body text paragraph.

Put name and contact information.

Tracking changes in red.

Work on Olive grey.  click in olive grey 1, click all to turn them all to olive grey 1, update styles.

When we had typewriters we would send our manuscripts off to the printer and we would type a double hyphen and the printer would change this double hyphen to a long dash, roughly the length of the letter "M" in that typeface.

hyphen hyphen word space will change to an em dash.  Em dashes go between groups of words, hyphens go between words.

Bullet list items here and here.

Created lists into bullet items.
Space after bullet items.
3 points between lines, new style

Wild card, bullet style

Get spcific on computer skills, no more intermediate.

Work on it.Save as

Design issues.

Term project discussion.

Establishing groups and who is in each group.

Non Daedalus ideas for term projects that don't involve crickets chirping

Explaining how to setup a fundraiser for a nonprofit.

private school for children with autism with adequate equipment and supplies.

Solution papers

If we were on Daedalus we would split into two teams and compete to see who could come up with the best escape plan.

Possibly a fire plan, how to build a fire

How to recycle everything so there is no waste.  A recycling guide.Vern's suggestion

Why can't UVU do what BYU is doing with recycling?  University has a don't care attitude.

How do you get people to care about recycling

How to produce or preproduce a movie

Home remedy guide.  Herbal remedies.

No way to engineer a thousand foot ship that won't break its back if raised to a sixty degree angle.

Book on parachute rigging.

Any other book ideas?

Main project a semester long book writing project.

Crime scene evaluation, firemen

strong portfolio

I can manage large strong projects

blacksmith guide

marooned with all the raw resources you need could you create the technologies necessary to escape

How to make textiles

all the basic technologies that helped us get to here and now.

If you were able to pitch it well enough he might approve it.

How to live off grid.

he had a backpacking stove that runs on bits of solid fuel sucha s twigs, animal dung, efficient burning, generates electricity through the thermal capacity of two metals their conductivity, a fan come on, burns hot called a biolite.  Non tradiitonal technology.  How do you generate energy hydroelectrical power.  As soon as you start talking about electricity and

Notes 3 Sep 2012

3 Sep 2012
No school